Really interested to read this! I think brutal sounds good too... although I'm such an impatient reader not sure how I'd cope! My first episode is over one day only so I can't leave real time breaks but do need to stretch over a few days soooo... I'll wait to hear feedback :)

I've got the player as one particular character so they can choose most of her lines, but the lines don't influence in the outcomes, it's more tone. Now I'm wondering if player should be more than one character.... oh this forum is dangerous. I don't have much time to change my mind! Eek.

Hi everyone! I'm Emily, from London but living in Mallorca. I'm a novelist and blogger, and working on my first interactive story. It's all new and an exciting to me.